That's probably the only comment I'm capable of writing right now. But no, let's concentrate and try to be more coherent, because such a gold deserves better commentary than flaily keymash, okay.
I FREAKING LOVED IT. If there's something that deserves to be called a masterpiece, then for me, this story definitely does. I don't even know where to begin expressing my amazement. Because, really, everything is so perfect about it.
The story-telling was amazing, from the same beginning to the very end. You did a really great job when it comes to character development; throughout the whole fic I became really connected with Jonghun, and I really felt for him - but not only for him, because you also did something that most writers forget about - you concentrated on the other characters too, enough for the reader to get to know them, but at the same time not enough for them to dim the main one. I loved how every aspect of the story seemed to join together and create the wholeness, how you managed to write about so many things, emotions and relations, but you still didn't forget about the story's main plot.
And most of all, I love the feeling I got after finishing reading, after that one last sentence—satisfaction. Because I'm really satisfied, I don't feel like there is something missing, like I'd add or change something. Which is rare, tbh. D:
Meh. I have no idea if this comment expresses everything I think about this, probably not, but uh, let me just love you, and re-read this forever, okay. ;; ♥
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That's probably the only comment I'm capable of writing right now. But no, let's concentrate and try to be more coherent, because such a gold deserves better commentary than flaily keymash, okay.
I FREAKING LOVED IT. If there's something that deserves to be called a masterpiece, then for me, this story definitely does. I don't even know where to begin expressing my amazement. Because, really, everything is so perfect about it.
The story-telling was amazing, from the same beginning to the very end. You did a really great job when it comes to character development; throughout the whole fic I became really connected with Jonghun, and I really felt for him - but not only for him, because you also did something that most writers forget about - you concentrated on the other characters too, enough for the reader to get to know them, but at the same time not enough for them to dim the main one. I loved how every aspect of the story seemed to join together and create the wholeness, how you managed to write about so many things, emotions and relations, but you still didn't forget about the story's main plot.
And most of all, I love the feeling I got after finishing reading, after that one last sentence—satisfaction. Because I'm really satisfied, I don't feel like there is something missing, like I'd add or change something. Which is rare, tbh. D:
Meh. I have no idea if this comment expresses everything I think about this, probably not, but uh, let me just love you, and re-read this forever, okay. ;; ♥