so finally getting to your comment ;; really sorry for taking so long D: aish I have a thing for delaying comments and replies when I promise them soon >รถ<
yunho likes sensible things, like ties that match his suits and scarves in the dead of winter. he also likes warm drinks and curling under blankets, also in the dead of winter. jaejoong knows all of these things, so he purposely buys him hot pink ties and scarves in the middle of summer so that he has time to lose them before winter.
I really like the wording and structure and style of the first paragraph <3 it's a really great start and idk, I like it a lot. the connection between jaejoong and yunho and their personalities.
yunho never thought anything of what he said. jaejoong walks a very fine line between the sane and insane, so he usually just files his words away into a corner of his mind.
oh yeah, jaejoong baby haha <3 again I like how you worded this and you can already sense bit of forecast
he doesn't like to complain though, because complaining is not a leaderly thing--or a yunho-y thing to do.
I love how you portray his personality so well. I think he really is like this sometimes. and that's what makes him an awesome leader among other things ♥
changmin is one of the easier members to take care of, but yunho feels like working so hard with just him there has taken away a lot of the fun they used to have with the other members.
omg this is so real, so true!!! I feel like this can really be said about the reality, the real situation now.
"jaejoong-hyung?" yunho cautions, scratching at the back of his neck and trying to pretend that what he's feeling isn't hope.
omg this is so cute. and I could actually hear jaejoong's voice in my head when he said the 'u-know yunho hwaiting' part ;;
the three stare up at him, looking like deer caught in the headlights,
omg yes, the picture in my head.. lol yes, this is very cute and real and idk. true <3
after junsu knees him in the spleen in excitement, he's almost certain they're from pain.
lol of course. junsu, of course, you would. <3
finally, after so long, yunho's chest doesn't feel lined. he takes a deep breath and smells vanilla shampoo, and when he releases it, the worlds okay again.
I love the reuniting scene, especially the yunjae. I rarely or better never read yunjae fics, ideky, they just doesn't really were that attractive to me. but I like how you portray them ♥ oh especially the 'shy' part for jaejoong really got me, somehow, idk <3
this is your first full dbsk fic? I love it, really <3 especially the yunjae, both portrayed so realistically. sure, there is always improvement, I think especially with the younger ones, but it was really great <3 I love it ;~; (and and happy ot5 dbsk fic still with lawsuit background ♥)
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yunho likes sensible things, like ties that match his suits and scarves in the dead of winter. he also likes warm drinks and curling under blankets, also in the dead of winter. jaejoong knows all of these things, so he purposely buys him hot pink ties and scarves in the middle of summer so that he has time to lose them before winter.
I really like the wording and structure and style of the first paragraph <3 it's a really great start and idk, I like it a lot. the connection between jaejoong and yunho and their personalities.
yunho never thought anything of what he said. jaejoong walks a very fine line between the sane and insane, so he usually just files his words away into a corner of his mind.
oh yeah, jaejoong baby haha <3 again I like how you worded this and you can already sense bit of forecast
he doesn't like to complain though, because complaining is not a leaderly thing--or a yunho-y thing to do.
I love how you portray his personality so well. I think he really is like this sometimes. and that's what makes him an awesome leader among other things ♥
changmin is one of the easier members to take care of, but yunho feels like working so hard with just him there has taken away a lot of the fun they used to have with the other members.
omg this is so real, so true!!! I feel like this can really be said about the reality, the real situation now.
"jaejoong-hyung?" yunho cautions, scratching at the back of his neck and trying to pretend that what he's feeling isn't hope.
omg this is so cute. and I could actually hear jaejoong's voice in my head when he said the 'u-know yunho hwaiting' part ;;
the three stare up at him, looking like deer caught in the headlights,
omg yes, the picture in my head.. lol yes, this is very cute and real and idk. true <3
after junsu knees him in the spleen in excitement, he's almost certain they're from pain.
lol of course. junsu, of course, you would. <3
finally, after so long, yunho's chest doesn't feel lined. he takes a deep breath and smells vanilla shampoo, and when he releases it, the worlds okay again.
I love the reuniting scene, especially the yunjae. I rarely or better never read yunjae fics, ideky, they just doesn't really were that attractive to me. but I like how you portray them ♥
oh especially the 'shy' part for jaejoong really got me, somehow, idk <3
this is your first full dbsk fic? I love it, really <3
especially the yunjae, both portrayed so realistically. sure, there is always improvement, I think especially with the younger ones, but it was really great <3 I love it ;~;
(and and happy ot5 dbsk fic still with lawsuit background ♥)
thanks for writing and sharing this!!